my name is yura -hwang I lived in geo-je
I go to geoje middle school
my hobby is reading a book listening to the music
they are really comfortable and happy
when I grow up I want to help people like my mother.
about four years ago I watched documentary about poor people. then
I realized many people need help.
so I dreamed about it
Thanks for sharing some details about Yura.
ReplyDeleteOne thing are MUST get in the habit of at GLPS.
Start ALL your sentences with capital letters.
And ALWAYS use a period at the end of the sentence.
Please rewrite this with the following corrections:
Hello! I am happy to meet you. ^^
My name is Yura Hwang. I live in Geo-je
I go to Geoje Middle School
My hobby is reading books and listening to music.
they are really comfortable and happy
thaks for your comments^^ I'll try to fix it
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